Influenced by a form of “Sangam” literature called akam, “Pastoral” links human emotion to the landscape in which it takes place. Caesura and repetition—“the turn/ the turn-signal,” “the river river”—interrupt smooth elaborations of syntax, enacting a mind in the process of working through memory, checking itself, revising. The poem is full of attentive tenderness, emphasized—isn’t rhyme a kind of wedding?—by off-rhymes in critical places—queue, coo, and you; cause, pause, and applause, for example. |