The Echo's Rose
Shuzo Takiguchi
Translated from the Japanese Mary Jo Bang & Yuki Tanaka
Delicate life at the bottom of a bottle
I drink you up

Sky-blue shadow resting on the landing
I step up and onto you

Whenever a gesture of love
singed the cigarette’s rose
an echo of O arose from the ash
from the book A KISS FOR THE ABSOLUTE / Princeton University Press
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“The Echo’s Rose” is one of twelve poems in Shuzo Takiguchi’s 1937 collection "Fairy’s Distance," each paired with an illustration by Yoshibumi Abe. Translating this poem, we grappled with the word 木魂, which typically means “echo,” but its etymology also evokes tree spirits from Japanese folklore. These spirits are sometimes heard as delayed echoes in mountainous forests. To reflect this dual meaning, we personified “echo” using the interjection “O” and played with its o sounds to create a phonetic echo.

Yuki Tanaka on "The Echo's Rose"
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